Betrayal
Posted on November 25, 2014

Isabel was the one for me, but for some reason she chose Henry. It took several years to get over her hypnotic eyes, her luscious voice, and her seductive laughter; in the end I chose to be Henry’s best friend and Isabel’s occasional lover.  Things didn’t unravel as I had hoped, but as we matured into the morally-gray individuals that we have become, I found our relationship to work for us. Henry was unaware, Isabel loved me, and I lived in poetic misery.

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IWSG : Working with Editors
Posted on November 5, 2014
I had a great experience with my editor for Selfish Moment. She gave me valuable feedback and even insight to the medical aspect of the story since she was a retired trauma nurse, which was a surprise bonus. She works on mostly contemporary fiction, and everything was great. I even submitted my novel to the Writer's Digest Self Publishing Competition last year, mainly for the overall review, and I received what I feel was a pretty good score. You can see the judge's review commentary in a separate post here.

I decided to go with another editor for Distant Origins since it's a sci-fi thriller, with someone who said they worked with the genre. It wasn't as smooth, and getting overall feedback was like pulling porcupine needles from a gorilla's back.

Gorilla's don't have needles you say?...Exactly!

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