Aw! I loved it!At first I was really surprised you took the perspective of a guy - a HIGH SCHOOL guy- for a Valentines poem, but within a few stanzas I thought, Of course! It's perfect. The end is the best. Is this you and your husbands story? Cause that would be so fun!
Not really. We met in college, in a computer science class (snore). The whole putting salt in coffee thing...I actually did that to my dad once when I was in high school and he did say, "What are you in love or something?" He'd always say that whenever my brother or I did something stupid, like put salt in his coffee. :-D